Holiday Slow Write

These past couple of days Room 1 has been working on a specific Slow Write. This Slow Write is all about our 2 week holiday. We had to make a 10 sentence story. All sentences had to contain specific elements for example adverbs, " Woohoo" and many more. Please leave some feedback and comments about my learning.

Holiday Slow Write:
A day out Farming:

“ Woohoo!" My heart warmed up as I realized it was sunny on a cold winter's day! It's finally here the

smell of the farm and taste of shepards pie. I could hear sheep baaing. Quickly I zipped to the fourwheeler.
" Am I allowed to ride the bike? I asked myself " Although the key was in and I predicted I could turn the
bike on, I still needed to ask. In my mind I could hear the sound of the motor, the touch of the
cu cushioned see the wheels turning as I sped away. Lets Crank it up... WAIT! Why is it not turning on?
Suddenly the motor changed to a loud beat. " BRMMM" Now it's time to feed the pigs!

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3 Stars and a Wish - Term 2

This task is to show what I have improved in Term 2, and also what I need to improve on next term. My three stars are showing what I have improved. My stars are based on subjects that I have improved on, for example Maths, writing and reading. Then the rectangle is my wish. My wish is to show what I want to improve on next term. Please leave some feedback about my learning!