Wednesday 8 August 2018

Naomi's Improving Blog Comments

Today Koka Maria came in and we worked on some Cyber Smart learning. We chose one of our comments that we did for somebody else and we fixed and edited them to make them a better blog comment. Here is my before and after! Please leave some feedback and comments about my learning.



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  1. Unknown19 September 2018 at 20:29

    Kia ora Naomi
    I like the way you have made improvements to your blog comment for Shai's post. Your comment shares positive feedback and feed-forward. Tino pai.
    Koka Jo

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