Holiday Slow Write

These past couple of days Room 1 has been working on a specific Slow Write. This Slow Write is all about our 2 week holiday. We had to make a 10 sentence story. All sentences had to contain specific elements for example adverbs, " Woohoo" and many more. Please leave some feedback and comments about my learning.

Holiday Slow Write:
A day out Farming:

“ Woohoo!" My heart warmed up as I realized it was sunny on a cold winter's day! It's finally here the

smell of the farm and taste of shepards pie. I could hear sheep baaing. Quickly I zipped to the fourwheeler.
" Am I allowed to ride the bike? I asked myself " Although the key was in and I predicted I could turn the
bike on, I still needed to ask. In my mind I could hear the sound of the motor, the touch of the
cu cushioned see the wheels turning as I sped away. Lets Crank it up... WAIT! Why is it not turning on?
Suddenly the motor changed to a loud beat. " BRMMM" Now it's time to feed the pigs!

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3 Stars and a Wish - Term 2

This task is to show what I have improved in Term 2, and also what I need to improve on next term. My three stars are showing what I have improved. My stars are based on subjects that I have improved on, for example Maths, writing and reading. Then the rectangle is my wish. My wish is to show what I want to improve on next term. Please leave some feedback about my learning!

My Avatar:

This task is called ' All about Me ' This avatar represents me, for example my favourite colours and hobbies. Please leave some feedback and comments about my learning!

Me Recipe:

NAOMI'S CHEESEBURGER OF SUCCESS:

Ingredients:

• 4 cups of FRIENDSHIP
• 7 grams of CREATIVITY
• 28 tablespoons of CONFIDENCE
• 5 cups of RESPONSIBILITY
• ⅓ of a  teaspoon of TEAMWORK
• 2 cups of RESPECT
• ½ a cup of EDITING
• 11 ounces of HONESTY

Aim:

My aim is to share a recipe about how I can improve in my learning. By making a

delicious, cheesy cheeseburger

Equipment:

• 2 Large Bowls
• A plate to serve on
• A pan big enough for a meat pattie
• 
  

Procedure:

1. Turn your stove on and get your pan ready, then add your oil into the pan
2. Add 4 cups of FRIENDSHIP, 2 cups of RESPECT to your large bowl
3. Add to another large bowl 28 tablespoons of CONFIDENCE
4. Then Add 5 cups of RESPONSIBILITY and ⅓ of a  teaspoon of TEAMWORK
5. Mix both mixtures together, afterwards add ½  a cup of EDITING
6. Afterwards mold everything into a meat patty, and cook in the pan
7. To create your bread buns add 11 ounces of HONESTY
8. Also add 7 grams of CREATIVITY to your bread
9. Then serve your cheeseburger on your plate with a great, big smile!

Naomi's Google Drawings Images

Today I created a Google drawing with images. We learnt how to arrange a photo over top of another photo. I choose the netball player because my favourite sport is netball. I personally choose the background because it is so beautiful in Mahia. We also learnt how to use tools in google and make sure that the image is transparent and labeled for reuse.

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Google Drawings Learning

Today we did a task called what do i know on Google drawings. I found this task easy and fun because i learnt knew things and also got to show what i know. Mani Kalani is helping us learn and improve our chromebook skills. Koka Maria ( the Mani Kalani person ) come's in every Wednesday and talks to us about the chromebook. In this task i showed 3 things that i know.

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Duathalon

LI: I am sharing some of my ideas, feelings and thoughts on my blog about the

     Duathlon  today!

Success Criteria: It makes sense when I read it I have used capital letters and full stops correctly I have had my blogging buddy check my blog before I publish it

• Running laps,
• Supportive friends and family,
• Accomplishing the 2 course Duathlon,
• Stretching before the duathlon starts,
• I felt tired and exhausted after my race

"Duathlon Day" I sighed. The Duathlon starts 9am sharp and my Brother is up second. We rushed around at home. Then  I remembered I forgot my drink bottle just as we were at the corner of my Street. I didn't want to rush my Mum. Anyway we had no time to go back it was 8: 50. We got to school and lined up with our classes and went to the duathlon waiting area. We waited in year lines on blue tapolans. 20 minutes later and the year 5 boys have just been called so that means i am up next. My heart was pounding like never before. I set a goal. My goal was to beat my friend Kohine. " Year 6's " called Matua Ferogos. I got really nervous. As I was marching over to the starting line. I saw my Mum. She was cheering me on so much it made me much more nervous! We finally got ready, because lots of year 6 Girls were putting their feet over the line. Cheaters. " On your marks, Bang " I sprinted away and by time I was on my second lap I said to the girl beside me I regret sprinting at the start.  But i think she was confused, because she didn't see me sprinting at the start anyway. Coming around on my 3rd lap I walked the hill. When I got up the hill I started jogging again until I got to the bike station.  I was still thinking about my goal. 2 minutes later I was running across the grass and onto the road. I slowly lifted my bike over the bump and on to the reserve. All I could hear was panting, lots of panting. Biking on the bumpy grass was a bit of a challenge. I always went past the cone then turned the corner, so i didn't have to slow down. I did that 11 times. I hopped off my  bike and crossed the road. Then I hopped back on again. I biked up the road and along the path then dropped my bike over in the transition. Coming through the gap and down the hill I ended my duathlon with 2 laps running. As I was running down the finish line I was thinking about my goal. My goal was to beat Kohine and guess what I did she was 2 people behind me. I was stunned. I've never beaten her before. I didn't come a placing but  did accomplish my goal.

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